Thursday, September 29, 2011

Reflections On Revision

        I try not to make my writing process very difficult. In previous English classes we

would have to brainstorm on a sheet of paper and also do prewriting and I didn't enjoy

doing that. I usually just flip open my lap top and start typing right then and there. This

way is easier for me because whatever comes to my head at that moment, I type it. I know

people that do different things to create their particular essay.

        I do like writing a rough draft then fixing my mistakes and maybe adding important

points that should be included. I think it is very important to write a rough draft because

you can then improve your essay tremendously.  I, personally like to get feed back from my

peers and instructor to make my essay better and more enjoyable to read. I tend to go off

topic occasionally and that's probably the number one thing I can improve on. I start off

strong with a topic in my thesis sentence and by the end of my essay I could support my

thesis a little better.  I think I could also use a larger vocabulary in my writing. I could

always improve on my vocabulary. English has always been my best subject, but as I have

been getting older it's become harder for me.

Friday, September 23, 2011

Close Reading of a Passage

"My affection for my guest increases every day.  He excites at once my admiration and my pity to an astonishing degree.  How can I see so noble a creature destroyed by misery without feeling the most poignant grief?  He is so gentle, yet so wise; his mind is so cultivated; and when he speaks, although his words are culled with the choicest art, yet they flow with rapidity and unparalleled eloquence" (Shelley 15).

I picked this paragraph out of "Frankenstein" for many reasons. It caught my attention by the passionate words she used. My first reaction to this passage was that she was really falling in love with this guy who she considers him as, "the stranger". After reading up to this point, I can't help but think the stranger will continue to be involved throughout the whole book. Right now, she is already writing in her journal about him. I think this paragraph contributes to the novel because I think as the story continues on, it will turn into a love story. Well, at least I hope it does; I love those kind of novels. On the other hand, it could have a totally different impression. "The stranger" ends up getting sick and is unable to talk. The crew on the ship takes care of him for a couple days and then he tells Walton, the captain, his story and they become good friends. Walton considers him to be a friend that he has always wanted. I'm excited to continue to read this novel because I've heard many good things about it! So far, it seems interesting and something that I could get into.



Photo Cred: http://horrorcrush.com/articles/2010/12/02/contemporary-frankenstein-in-the-works/

Link: http://www.blackgate.com/2010/10/08/mary-shelley%E2%80%99s-frankenstein-and-the-power-of-myth-making/

Sunday, September 18, 2011

Essay 2

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Amelia Willadsen

Cline

ENG102

15 September 2011


The Art of Poetry

            Poetry is an imaginative awareness of experience expressed through meaning, sound, and rhythmic language choices so as to evoke an emotional response. I think poetry could have many different meanings to the reader but only the writer knows exactly what their poem is about. Poetry is nearly impossible to understand because most authors use such a distinct language throughout their work. I am not a big poetry fan; however, I think it can be very beautiful to read. The tone, imagery, and rhyme in poems are what make the actual poem exciting to read.
            I chose to examine the poem, “Lady Lazarus” by Sylvia Plath because out of all the poems available, this is the one that caught my attention the most. I have read this poem over and over again to try and figure out what Plath was really talking about throughout her poem. When I first started reading it, I didn’t know what to think exactly; I was a little confused. When I read,
    I do it so it feels like hell.   

I do it so it feels real.

I guess you could say I’ve a call”,
 
I thought maybe she has cancer and she is describing exactly how it feels to have such an

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awful disease.

            I noticed Sylvia Plath’s use of intense language. She uses language that I consider eerie or frightening but that kind of language is what caught my attention so quickly. She puts hair-raising words together to make the imagery that much more effective like, “And pick the worms off me like sticky pearls”, and “That melts to a shriek”.  I was stunned on how great the imagery was in “Lady Lazarus”. I could picture the things she was saying perfectly in my head with nothing blurry at all.  In my opinion, this poem had the best imagery out of any other poem.
            Sylvia Plath included some rhyme in her poem but it wasn’t consistent throughout the whole thing. This is one out of few stanzas where she rhymes,
“Out of the ash
I rise with my red hair   
And I eat men like air”.
    I didn’t understand this stanza at all and it keeps me wondering after the many times I have read it. This is an example of when I said the author is the only one that knows exactly what it means. This is a stanza that didn’t rhyme at all,
   “A sort of walking miracle, my skin   
    Bright as a Nazi lampshade,   
   My right foot.”
   She has many stanzas that don’t rhyme, however not all poems have to rhyme to be considered good. I like poems that rhyme better because I think it becomes easier to read. Rhyming creates a rhythm and it makes the poem flow nicely throughout.

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                After reading “Lady Lazarus” for the second time I began to think of more ideas about what Plath might be talking about. I came to the conclusion that she is talking about committing suicide attempts more than once. I got this idea because she states,
“And I a smiling woman.   
I am only thirty.
And like the cat I have nine times to die.”
When I read this stanza I was confused because I was asking myself, why does she have nine times to die? Another reason I thought she has committed suicide is because she includes,
“Nevertheless, I am the same, identical woman.   
The first time it happened I was ten.   
It was an accident.

The second time I meant
To last it out and not come back at all.   
I rocked shut.”
I asked myself, what else could she mean by this? After reading these two stanzas, I made up my mind. There’s no doubt in my head that she’s not talking about committing suicide.
            In conclusion, I thought this poem came straight from the author’s heart. I liked how Plath’s poem was so realistic because suicide is still such a serious issue today.

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 I thought the poem had great word choice to make the poem that much more interesting to read. Although I’m not a huge poetry fan, this poem made me think a lot about what she was talking about. For that reason, I enjoyed “Lady Lazarus”.

Tuesday, September 6, 2011

Response to a Poem

Amelia Willadsen

Laura Cline

ENG102

6 September 2011


Blog Post #3
            The poem “Lady Lazarus” by Sylvia Plath stood out to me more than any other poem that was available to read. Throughout the entire poem were powerful descriptive words that kept me interested the whole time. I think the words that the author used is what kept me interested. Words like “flesh” or “eye pits”. I consider these words to be creepy or bone chilling. This poem could have many different thoughts to create the outcome. I enjoy reading poems like “Lady Lazarus” because it keeps the reader wondering throughout the whole poem.
                I honestly didn’t know what to make the outcome of “Lady Lazarus”. She adds,
 “I am only thirty.
And like the cat I have nine times to die.”
That part was a little confusing to me because before the author said that, I was thinking she has cancer at a young age and is describing what it feels like to have the disease. I didn’t know what to think after that statement. She writes this next stanza soon after and it led me back to think my original thought.
“Dying
Is an art, like everything else.   
I do it exceptionally well.”
I thought this stanza was very powerful. What could she mean by, "I do it exceptionally well?" I think knowing you were going to die pretty soon would be extremely scary to come across. The author describes it as an art.
            In conclusion, “Lady Lazarus” was a fantastic poem in my eyes. I would be interested in looking into some more of Sylvia Plath’s work to see what else she has up her sleeve. Maybe she has more poems like this one or maybe she wrote some completely different. I would also be interested to look into this particular poem and get some questions that I have, answered. I’m curious to find out what she was really talking about throughout her poem.
http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/15292