Friday, October 14, 2011

Essay 3 Rough Draft


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Amelia Willadsen

Cline

English 102

12 October 2011

Taking a Closer Look into Frankenstein

           
            The novel, Frankenstein by Mary Shelley was a dark twisted story about the creation of a monster.  I thought the novel was interesting and it also includes quite a few themes and motifs.  One theme that continues throughout the whole book is monstrosity. The monster in this book is not accepted into society, right off the bat because of the way he looked.  Victor is the one who created the monster out of stolen body parts and uncommon chemicals.  Victors secrecy and amount of selfishness secludes him from human society.  This leads me into the second theme which it secrecy.  Victor uses secrecy with his obsession in creating life.  He finds pleasure in bringing down the monster also is a complete secret until Walton finds out about what Victor is doing. Walton ends up being the person who successfully solves the monster and Victors severe relationship. He starts writing letters to help resolve their relationship because he confesses everything in them. The monster is happy that Walton is involved because he
                                                                                                                                                
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feels like someone will finally understand him. I believe her purpose in writing Frankensteinwas her reflecting on her life but gave it a little twist. She added more details and characters to make it more appealing to read. 
            I chose to read, Possessing Nature: The Female in Frankenstein by Anne K. Mellor in the back of the book.  The reason I think she wrote this about her life is because this article explains how Mary Shelley and all women were expected to do. This article talks all about how it was way harder for women to get recognized and given a chance at something. “…portrays the consequences of a social construction of gender that values the male above the female” (Mellor 274).  I can see what she’s talking about because its even like that nowadays and I can only imagine how much worse it was back then. She also states, “Inside the home, women are either kept as a kind of pet; or they work as house wives, childcare providers, and nurses, or as servants” (Mellor 275).  I, being a woman, reading this is very saddening to me because it isnt fair to us. This world is dominated by the male species just because theyre naturally stronger and faster than women. An example of this is that men sports get way more attention than women sports and I think that is absolutely ridiculous because women work just as hard as them if not harder. Women should be respected and noticed for how hard-working and great of species they are.
                                                                                                                                                 Willadsen 3         I started reading the article, Frankenstein and Radical Science by Marilyn Butler to learn about the history of the book.  As I started, I learned that the novel had its ups and downs.  When Frankenstein was released and the characters and plot first became public property, the people were shocked about what the actual meaning signifies. Readers, filmgoers, people who are neither, take the very word Frankenstein to convey an awful warning: Don’t usurp Gods prerogative in the Creation-game, or dont get too clever with technology (Butler 302).  When people heard the word Frankenstein”, they automatically had negative thoughts about it.  They way I interpreted the second half of the quote was that if God didnt create what was put on this Earth, then we shouldnt be using technology to try to create something more clever.  Frankenstein seems to be disobeying Gods Creation-game.  This article also talks about how this novel had trouble with the media.  The 1818 Frankenstein”, which had drawn nourishment, energy, importance from lectures and journals, had lived by the media, and after 1819 might well have died by the media (Butler 303).  At the beginning of Frankenstein in 1818, it was popular among the literature world.  When 1819 rolled around, that’s when people started looking closer into what Frankenstein
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truly meant. This novel started off strong in the media but eventually by the end, critics stated how it’s basically dead.
            There have been many positive things coming from this novel.  “Frankenstein, the True Story; or, Rousseau Judges Jean- Jacques”, by Lawrence Lipking talks all about all the success coming out of this novel.  In the past few decades, a period in which Mary Shelleys Frankenstein has been received into the canon of English literature-to judge from the number of editions, books, essays, and course adoptions- a remarkable critical consensus has grown up around it (Lipking 313).  This tells me how much this novel has been used as a resource and how much it has impacted English literature.  Even I have heard many great things about Frankenstein before I was required to purchase it. Readers have many different interpretations of this novel and most don’t know the real meaning.  Lipking states, To begin with, everybody misunderstands it; or more accurately, hundreds of millions of people who have never read the book think that they know what it is about, from seeing or hearing about a movie, and most people do not have a clue” (Lipking 314). I agree with him just because people comprehend what they read differently and sometimes it is hard for the reader to figure out what the author is trying to get across within their book.  In conclusion, Frankenstein was an excellent
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choice to use because there are so many different opinions about this novel. In my opinion, this book was interesting and I wouldnt choose to read this if I was the one that got to choose it. On the other hand, I enjoyed reading the articles in the back of the book and learning about the history of Frankenstein”.

5 comments:

  1. Hello Amelia,
    I thought this was a very interesting post. My primary suggestion to you would be to include a works cited at the end of the paper. I usually create my paper and works cited sheet in Word and then copy it in to Blogger. This helps me remember to put in. I would also add that you may want to finish your essay with a punchline, something that will grab the reader one last time and leave them thinking about your paper. Good job and keep up the good work!
    Pax et Bonum,
    Joseph

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  2. Great Job on your essay! Definitely don't forget your Citations at the end. I also saw that Shelley was a determined woman. She longed for so much more than what society was going to give her. You did a great job of putting her character into perspective!

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  3. Hey i enjoyed your essay. I found it very good when i seen you addressed the articles you applied in your essays. Reading what you had to say made me realized the corrections i should make on my next draft, and it should improve my essay when the final comes around. The detail you went into abut your perspective was great also.
    -Amber W.

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  4. Hi Amelia, I enjoyed reading your essay. It was written in a different form than I would have expected, but you gave a lot of information and got a lot out of the critical essays. I think it would be a good idea to put in a better conclusion, something that wraps up the essay. And don't forget your citation page. I am sure you put that in the copy turned in to Mrs. Cline.. Good job keep it up. Marilyn

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  5. When writing academic work, try not to use "I" or phrases like "I think", or "in my opinion" because it can weaken your point. You have good bones for your essay but I think changing that would help out the writing a lot. Making firm statements and clear "topic sentences" would help too. Good essay though.

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